This is an interesting subject and your opening paragraph reads as a good first sequence for a short documentary treatment.
However, after this, you stop writing a treatment. Instead you write about what you are planning to do in making this documentary – which is a stage before the treatment. Why didn’t you use the example I gave you and that we went through in class?
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