Comments on first draft
2. Section 2.1 is a little weak and the references to Oregon are not convincing, there are other more generic and authoritative sources that you could use;
3. the conclusion to this chapter (2.5) is rather weak;
4. You say at the conclusion to chapter 4 (at p135) that the new Saudi Arbitration law has “reawakened the business community’s enthusiasm towards arbitration etc” Where or what is the evidence for this?;
5. The second half of chapter 8 is full of recommendations (practical, policy, legislative) – this is great but it would be useful for the reader to have all of the recommendations summarised in a table at the end of the chapter;
6. As it is, the recommendations are spread out in the chapter in various bullet points and it can be hard to remember their significance when reading them. A table of recommendations at the end of the chapter would be useful;
Dear writer
the previous message was included the supervisor comments on the first draft , some comments need some editing and some of them need just proof reading;
therefore, i placed two orders; this order for the editing regarding to supervisor comments bellow ( in first message ) and the other order No for just proof reading.
so please in this order just fellow the comments bellow to make the editing:
supervisor Comments on first draft
2. Section 2.1 is a little weak and the references to Oregon are not convincing, there are other more generic and authoritative sources that you could use;
( so please just proof read the introduction and change the Oregon reference with book, article or journal)
3. the conclusion to this chapter (2.5) is rather weak;
( so please make a comprehensive Conclusion) page and half or two page will be enough)
4. You say at the conclusion to chapter 4 (at p135) that the new Saudi Arbitration law has “reawakened the business community’s enthusiasm towards arbitration etc” Where or what is the evidence for this?;
( so please give the evidence for that point ) one page will be enough.
5. The second half of chapter 8 is full of recommendations (practical, policy, legislative) – this is great but it would be useful for the reader to have all of the recommendations summarized in a table at the end of the chapter;
6. As it is, the recommendations are spread out in the chapter in various bullet points and it can be hard to remember their significance when reading them. A table of recommendations at the end of the chapter would be useful;
this is very important part so please pay your attention for that we need to make tables – summarized all the recommendations from page 202 to 301 , i expect we need around 6 pages to do that .
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