please fix my paper here you can find attached: (i) my draft with the correction revised by the professor, (ii) the rubric for grading.
I already said to my professor I disagree with comment 3 4 5 this is a summary.
here is general comments please see attachments as well very important with specific comments. My paper is 5850 words because there are several
diagram so I paid for 6050 words
I enjoyed reading your draft for Nike, and learned a lot from your references to outside materials. Attached is a copy of your draft with my comments (using Word’s track changes), along with my rubric mark up (I highlighted my analysis of each grade element in yellow in the "Performance Level Criteria", and placed some thoughts in the "Areas to Improve" column in the "Grading Sheet" tab.
Overall, I think your recommendations are very detailed and very thoughtful, but perhaps a bit too detailed. They are fairly descriptive in nature, and the analytic points often seem buried way down in the paper. There are also whole sections missing from the detailed analysis (full general ecosystem and stakeholder analysis, full competitive ecosystems analysis, full core skills and capabilities value chain analysis, and full KSF analysis). A suggestion is to look at incorporating the skills/competencies that Nike needs to implement each recommendation, as well as pulling up (in a very brief manner) the key action items for each recommendation (they seem to exist in the details, but it was difficult for me to see any specfics in the overall recommendation; it read as very generic to me).
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